A speakeasy 10th anniversary — invitation
invitation · png
celebrate packJazz Age
A speakeasy 10th anniversary — invitation
oce_01kxjc0ftg7kkkj0bjcxjf · created 2026-07-15
pass rate 100%OQS v1.2.0
This pack was delivered unsigned — honestly labelled as exactly that.
The work
pass
Invitation copy — three variants
invitation · md
Warm
Ten years of something worth raising a glass to.
We're marking a decade the way it deserves — low lights, good company, and a night in Porto you won't want to leave early. Join us on 2026-11-14 and be part of it.
Come ready to stay a while.
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Formal
You are cordially invited to mark a decade.
The speakeasy's tenth anniversary will be observed on 2026-11-14 in Porto. Your presence at this milestone would be a distinct honour.
We look forward to receiving you.
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Plain
The speakeasy turns ten.
We're celebrating on 2026-11-14 in Porto. Come along.
Hope to see you there.
The Tribunal's report
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invitationpassfull report
compositionlegibilitystyle fidelitysubject fidelityplatform fitdefects
- CONTRAST_LOWAll body text clears 4.5:1.
- DIM_ASPECT_MISMATCHRendered at the requested 1024x1536.
- FILE_TOO_LARGE3210 KB — comfortable to share.
- PALETTE_DRIFTColours sit on the jazz_age palette (mean distance 10.8).
- POLICY_VIOLATIONFinal copy is clean.
- SCHEMA_INVALIDArtifact and payload satisfy their schemas.
- TEXT_OVERFLOW_RISK0/420 characters — fits.
The critic's notes
- · The oxblood accent (the circle above the coupe) reads as a floating, unanchored dot with no clear symbolic relationship to the coupe or the radiating geometry — its placement feels arbitrary rather than deliberate
- · The emerald ground specified in the House Style (#123A2E) is absent; the ground is near-black only, losing the jewel-toned depth the style calls for
- · The coupe's stem base shows a faint smear/doubling artefact where the radiating lines intersect it — minor but present
- · The word PORTO at the bottom is the only text; it identifies the city but carries none of the occasion information (anniversary, date), leaving the image functioning more as a brand mark than an invitation — type is set separately per Occestra convention so this is noted but not failed
- · The geometric ziggurat towers flanking the upper arc are slightly asymmetric in height on close inspection — left tower appears one step taller than the right
Disclosed gapsPLACEHOLDER_TEXT — Not a copy artifact; there is no text to check.
invitationpassfull report
voicespecificityfactual supportstructureplatform fit
- TEXT_OVERFLOW_RISKCopy is long enough to overflow its layout slot.
- CONTRAST_LOWA generated md carries no lettering (Occestra never renders type into imagery), so there is no contrast to measure.
- DIM_ASPECT_MISMATCHNot an image.
- FILE_TOO_LARGENot an image.
- PALETTE_DRIFTNot an image.
- POLICY_VIOLATIONFinal copy is clean.
- SCHEMA_INVALIDArtifact and payload satisfy their schemas.
The critic's notes
- · The date is rendered as a raw ISO string '2026-11-14' in all three variants — on a Jazz Age invitation this reads as a data field, not an occasion. It should be formatted as 'Saturday, 14 November 2026' or similar. This appears in all three variants and is the single most jarring note against the deco register.
- · Headcount is 1, which is unusual — the copy addresses a plural 'you' and 'good company' without any tension with a single-recipient brief. This may be intentional (one addressee) but 'Join us' and 'Come along' read as broadcast copy rather than a personal summons, which slightly undercuts the speakeasy intimacy the vibe calls for.
- · No time, no venue name, no RSVP mechanism — these are absent from the brief so cannot be penalised, but the repairBrief should flag them as slots to fill once the client supplies them.
- · The Warm variant's 'low lights, good company, and a night in Porto you won't want to leave early' is the strongest line in the set and earns its place. The Plain variant is appropriately spare. The Formal variant's 'would be observed' is slightly funereal for a celebration — 'will be held' or 'will be celebrated' would sit better.
- · TEXT_OVERFLOW_RISK: Copy is long enough to overflow its layout slot.
Pack-level gaps disclosed
- PLACEHOLDER_TEXTNot a copy artifact; there is no text to check.